Hello, can you check my writing? Oct. 28th I waited for my mommy and daddy coming back to my home in the morning. After they returned, I and mommy went to a laundromat because we had to dry our clothes. Then we moved to a small shopping center. We bought a wear that is used when you are cooking, and many socks. Some of them are unique because animal faces are printed on the surface. Do you like animal patten socks? At night, I was reading a book and knitting a bit. I could relaxed. It’s done.

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Hello, can you check my writing? Oct. 28th I waited for my mommy and daddy coming back to my home in the morning. After they returned, my mommy and mommy went to a laundromat because we had to dry our clothes. Then we moved to a small shopping center. We bought a wear that is used when you are cooking, and many socks. Some of them are unique because animal faces are printed on the surface. Do you like animal patten socks? At night, I was reading a book and knitting a bit. I could relaxed. It’s done.h

Hello, can you check my writing? Oct. 28th I waited for my mommy and daddy coming back to my home in the morning. After they returned, me and mommy went to a laundromat because we had to dry our clothes. Then we moved to a small shopping center. We bought a wear that is used when you are cooking, and many socks. Some of them are unique because animal faces are printed on the surface. Do you like animal patten socks? At night, I was reading a book and knitting a bit. I could relaxed. It’s done.

Hello, can you check my writing? Oct. 28th I waited for my mommy and daddy to come back home in the morning. After they returned, Mommy and Iwent to a laundromat because we had to dry our clothes. Then we moved to a small shopping center. We bought an attire that is used when you are cooking and many socks. Some of them are unique because animal faces are printed on the surface. Do you like animal pattened socks? At night, I was reading a book and knitting a bit. I got to relax. And it was done.