I really don't want to talk about this topic now, because I just received a message told me that I have extra work to do tomorrow. So, I have to replan my weekend schedule. In fact, after a five-day h

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I really don't want to talk about this topic now, because I just received a message told me that I have extra work to do tomorrow. So, I have to replan my weekend schedule. In fact, after a five-day hard work, I really need a relaxing weekend to digest all the stress from work and family. Especially in a bright sunny spring day, spending time with children is the best way to relax. Everyone always tells me that going out in nature can keep me healthy, but plans often aren't able to keep pace with changes. Spending time in office definitely increase the stress and make me more tired. I decide to make a plan for the rest of this weekend. I'd rather do something fun than complain everything. I'll try finish the extra work as early as possible, then enjoy the sunshime and breeze. Life is always full of uncertainties, don't be afraid of anything. Just do it with smile!

28 de mar. de 2025 7:33

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I really don’t want to talk about this topic now because I just received a message telling me that I have extra work to do tomorrow. So, I have to replan my weekend schedule. In fact, after five days of hard work, I really need a relaxing weekend to digest all the stress from work and family. Especially on a bright sunny spring day, spending time with children is the best way to relax. Everyone always tells me that going out in nature can keep me healthy, but plans often can’t keep pace with changes. Spending time in the office definitely increases the stress and makes me more tired. I’ve decided to make a plan for the rest of this weekend. I’d rather do something fun than complain about everything. I’ll try to finish the extra work as early as possible, then enjoy the sunshine and breeze. Life is always full of uncertainties, so don’t be afraid of anything. Just do it with a smile!

1. “received a message told me” → “received a message telling me” • “Telling me” is the correct form, as it is used to introduce indirect speech. 2. “five-day hard work” → “five days of hard work” • Corrected the phrasing to make it more natural and grammatically correct. 3. “spending time in office” → “spending time in the office” • “In the office” is the proper preposition when referring to a specific place. 4. “increase the stress” → “increases the stress” • “Increases” is the correct verb form, as the subject “spending time” is singular. 5. “I’ll try finish the extra work” → “I’ll try to finish the extra work” • Added “to” because “try” is followed by the infinitive form of a verb. 6. “sunshime” → “sunshine” • Corrected the typo. 7. “don’t be afraid of anything. Just do it with smile!” → “so don’t be afraid of anything. Just do it with a smile!” • Added “so” for smoother flow and “a” before “smile” for grammatical correctness.

29 de marzo de 2025

I really don't want to talk about this topic now, because I just received a message telling me that I have extra work to do tomorrow. So, I have to replan my weekend schedule. In fact, after five days of hard work, I really need a relaxing weekend to digest all the stress from work and family. Especially on a bright sunny spring day, spending time with my children is the best way to relax. Everyone always tells me that being outside can keep me healthy, but plans often aren't able to keep pace with changes. Spending time in the/an office definitely increases stress and makes me more tired (tires me out). I decided to make a plan for the rest of this weekend. I'd rather do something fun than complain about everything. I'll try to finish the extra work as early as possible, then enjoy the sunshine and breeze. Life is always full of uncertainties, so don't be afraid of anything. Just do it with a smile!

28 de marzo de 2025

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