About 5 years ago，I drove to Tibe with my husband. We spent nearly three weeks on road. The journey started from Hainan province. Along the way we went through Guangxi province, Yunnan province, Sichuan province. Ell these provinces are characterized by their high mountains, villages, rivers and high attitude. It was an amazing experience. For the first time, I drove on a mountain road surrounded by white clouds. We drove up to the top of a mountain which was several thousand meters high. The upper part of the mountain was covered with a thin layer of snow. It was really cool there. We need to wear lots of layers。 but in my life I saw the most beautiful scenery for the first time，(It was the most beautiful scenery I had ever seen in my life.). People had always said Tibe is a place where people can become easily frustrated and will come again and again. I totally agreed with that opinion.

About 5 years ago，I drove to Tibe with my husband. We spent nearly three weeks on road. The journey started from Hainan province. Along the way we went through Guangxi province、Yunnan province and Sichuan province. All these provinces are known for/characterised by their high mountains、villages、rivers and high attitude. it was an amazing experience . For the first time, I drove on the/a mountain road surrounded by white clouds. We drove up to the top of a mountain which was several thousand meters high and the top of the mountain was covered with a thin layer of snow. It was really cool there，we needed to wear more clothes than usual。 I saw the most beautiful scenery for the first time in my life. Ppeople have always said Tibe is a place where people will often want to come again and again，I totally agreed with that opinion. Hi Sally, I hope that my corrections help a little. Please try to remember to start each sentence with a capital letter. I am not quite sure what you mean by 'frustrated' in your last sentence - hopefully I have interpreted it correctly. It sounds like a lovely trip. Thank you for telling us about it. Victoria