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Ielts writing part Some people say that in order to be happy, you must have a job you love doing. Others say that other factors are more important.

Do you think that people can only help if they have a job they really enjoy?

<em>Most people spend eight hours or more every weekdays by working.For this reason, doing what you love to do at work is important, but there are more important factors to be happy. To illustrate , even if someone has a job which he or she doesn't enjoy can be happy with being healthy and having good social life.

People consider their job as a necessity. That means people work do not because they enjoy, but because they have to earn money to survive. Most of my friends have a job they do not like but they are happy because they have friends to enjoy spending their time with. For example, I have a friend whi hate his job but he loves his colleagues. He always spend his time with them after work and he is enjoying his life.

In my opinion, healthiness is most significant factor for happiness. I was not thinking that way before I worjed with disabled children. I was always complaining about my life before I met them and their family. If you asked them how you would be happy, they definitely would said that I would be happy if I had a normal child, or i would able to do anything to change my child to normal. So, job is not the only factor to be happy.

Overall, even the job you enjoy give some satisfaction, there are far more important factors to be happy. I do not agree that you must have a job you love to be happy.

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I wrote this essay down in 40 minutes without using dictionary.

What do you think guys, can you give me some tips?

17 de dic. de 2017 14:52

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