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Mr. Coff ! All was started when i got depressed on one day, it seemed no friend can helped, no problem solving, feeling so blue ... I didn't want do something wrong because of that, i just need to talked, but i can't talked to other person, then i met ... Mr. Coff, my less sugar hot coffee ! When i drunk it, i felt like talk to someone, i felt so calm and better. Thanks Mr. Coff !

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sorry meant to say I could never have corrected.
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I think Ali did a great job. I never could have have corrected your entry.
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Mr. Coff !

All was started one day when I got depressed  and my feeling was so blue, and it seemed no friend could help me or solve my problem.
I didn't want to do something wrong as a result of that. I just needed to talk, but I couldn't talk to a person and so I met Mr. Coff, my less-sugar hot coffee !
When I drank it, I felt as if I talked to someone & felt so calm and better.
Thanks Mr. Coff !

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