024_1908 Could you help me by correcting the text below?【Happy O-bon】
It's during O-bon holiday in Japan .
(O-bon is a traditonal summer event to honer our ancestors.)
I went to a concert of my farvorite musicians "Monky Majik" in this holiday.
It was very fun as usual. Canadian members (they are brothers) said "Happy O-bon!" at MC talking. It’s a very impressive expression for me. We japanese don't say so,
but "Happy O-bon" is really funny and so good. I loved this phrase! :)
They always entertain us at every concert with using two languages English and Japanese smoothly. I think that was amazing thing. Next year is coming in 20th anniversary for them, so I’m expecting form now what kind of concerts they will plan.
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024_1908 Could you help me by correcting the text below?【Happy O-bon】
It's currently O-bon holiday in Japan .
(O-bon is a traditional summer event to honor our ancestors.)
I went to a concert by my farvorite band "Monky Majik" during this holiday.
It was very fun as usual. Canadian members (they are brothers) said "Happy O-bon!" to the MC. It’s a very impressive expression for me. We Japanese don't say it, but "Happy O-bon" is really funny and so good. I loved this phrase! :)
They always entertain us at every concert by using two languages, English and Japanese, smoothly. I think that was an amazing thing. Next year will be the 20th anniversary for them, so I’m thinking now about what kind of concerts they will plan.
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