I am currently a junior university student. When I was at high school I didn't study hard, so I wasn’t able to get into a good university. This upset me a lot. I want to redo the university entrance examination so that I can study at a better university. To do this, however, would require a lot of effort. I know that if I don’t try hard I will never succeed.

You can see that my writing isn’t very good. I hope someone nice will help correct what I’ve written, because I’d really like to improve my English. Thank you so much! 🍀

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