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What a hard challenge this quarantine is for a novice! It is incredible to get used to something that one hasn't been accustomed before. The status quo of everybody changes instantly. I think everyone should stay calm and in spite the fact of the current health situation, you should try to look for something positive in order to keep healthy our mind. It is extremely tough to stay 24/7 at home, but it is the adaptation that people have to do in order to take care of themselves and their loved ones. I know this global situation have overwhelmed everyone, but there is something good behind all the bad things. Maybe there is something that you have always felt like doing. I think that kind of things should be done in this period of time that on the other hand it is kind of an oportunity for accomplishing those little things that have been postponed and that have to be done in order to make you feel that happiness that one day you dreamed of. Stay safe. Thanks for reading and correcting.

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What a hard challenge this quarantine is for a novice!

It is incredible to get used to something that one hasn't been accustomed to before. The status quo for everybody changes instantly. I think everyone should stay calm and in spite of the fact of the current health situation, you should try to look for something positive in order to keep your mind healthy. It is extremely tough to stay at home 24/7, but it is the adaptation that people have to do in order to take care of themselves and their loved ones. I know this global situation has overwhelmed everyone, but there is something good behind all the bad things. Maybe there is something that you have always felt like doing. I think those kind of things should be done in this period of time that on the other hand it is kind of an opportunity for accomplishing those little things that have been postponed and that have to be done in order to make you feel that happiness that one day you dreamed of.

Stay safe.
Thanks for reading and correcting.

The last sentence is too long. Try splitting it into two sentences.

"You should try to look for something positive in order to keep your mind healthy"
"We should try to look for something positive in order to keep our minds healthy"

Either of those would be fine, but watch out for 'agreement' like this (i.e. either we and our or you and yours)

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