Need correction/ Distance education
The coming of Internet has led the way of people’s working and living changed. The numbers of people who want to try distance education are growing, because it can provides them an opportunity to get a degree in their own houses. despite distance-learning are differ with traditional college education, it still have some advantages in some aspects.
Be compare with traditional education, distance education are more flexible, so it will allow more people have access to education. When students need search some educational resources, them can watch video curriculums. If them have questions them can stop or replay the video, until them totally understand. Moreover, those distance education are available in whole day form Monday to Sunday, it is very convenient for those people who always be busy.
On the other hand, distance education also can promote the conversation between students and teachers. Through some interactive tools in virtual classroom, students can ask their teacher question more easily. In this case, them can receive their tutor‘s advises, thereby completing all curriculums more effectively. In sometimes, them even can contact with scholars in world-famous universities, although them are living in their own countries.
One of the main disadvantages of distance education is it cannot promote student’s conversation skill, because distance education usually don’t have group work. Students are study alone, doesn’t have any chances to meet others. Them cannot broaden their social connections, it may have some adverse impact for their career development.
Because the convenience of distance education, it can popularize college education. But some disadvantages, like lacks interaction, lead it can not provide same outcomes like traditional education.
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The coming of the Internet has changed the way people work and live. The numbers of people who want to try distance education are growing, because it can provides them an opportunity to get a degree in their own houses. Despite distance-learning are differ with being different than traditional college education, it still have has some advantages in some aspects.
Hi Brandy! This was a long essay, so I just gave you corrections for a little bit of it. :)
Remember to look for subject-verb agreement. "Distance education" is singular, so we use "is" instead of "are." We also use "has" for singular subjects like "it."
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I wish somebody can help me correct this essay (T_T)
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