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A Dream Yesterday I dreamed a friend died but I didn’t feel sorrow. Because even though her body disappeared, I still could see her soul spinning in the sky. I could feel her, talk to her, except touching her. When I missed her, she would come to me. It seemed that she was not dead at all, but she just lived a life which was different from me. Do you believe that after people died their soul will remain eternity? I sincerely hope so. Because of that, dying will be an easy thing to be accepted. If not, how can you accept the truth that the one you love never show in your life? I admit that I am a little superstitious. Even though I believe science, I still believe in the super nature. How about you?

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A Dream

Yesterday I dreamed a friend died but I didn’t feel any sorrow, because even though her body disappeared, I still could see her soul spinning in the sky. I could feel her, talk to her, except touching her. When I missed her, she would come to me. It seemed that she was not dead at all, but she just lived a life which was different from me.

Do you believe that after people die d their soul will remain for eternity? I sincerely hope so, because of that, dying will be an easy thing to be accept ed. If not, how can you accept the truth that the one you love never show in your life will never be seen again? I admit that I am a little superstitious. Even though I believe science, I still believe in the supernatural. How about you?

Notes:

feel = touch, so when you say you can feel her, but not touch it seems contradictory,
maybe "you could sense her" or "you could see her" would be better here.

and yes, I believe in both science and an afterlife. There are things in my life, that science cannot explain, so the existence of God and an afterlife is the only logical conclusion.

Cheers.


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