Wo de hao pengyou

Wo xianzai xiang jieshao wo de hao pengyou. Ta jiao Lena. Ta shi ba sui. Ta you yi ge meimei. Ta mama shi daifu. Ta baba zuo zai yinhang gongzuo. Ta jia ren dou zhu zai Mosike.Ta cong Meiguo lai zher xuexi.
Lena xihuan tiaowu. Ta gen ta meimei chang chang bangzhu ta mama zuo fan, ye bangzhu zhengli ta Who? Her mother or just herself? If it's just herself. Write 'ta ziji de' woshi. Another issues is maybe you have to swap the two words I've just underlined.
Lena mei tian qi dian qi chuang. Qi chuang yihou, ta chi fan he In Chinese 'he' is not like 'and' in English, which should not contact two verbs and should only be used to contact nones etc. kan xinwen. Ta mama kan dianshi de shihou, ta baba zhen zai may change to 'shichang' or 'jiuhui' ta gei ta pengyou da dianhua.
Ta xia wu yi dian shang ke, wu dian xia ke. Xia ke yihou ta jiuhui gei wo da dianhua. Wanshang women yiqi qu dianyingyuan.

Wo de hao pengyou

Wo xianzai xiang jieshao wo de hao pengyou. Ta jiao Lena. Ta shi ba sui. Ta you yi ge meimei. Ta mama shi daifu. Ta baba zuo yinhang gongzuo. Ta jia ren dou zhu Moseke (Mosike).Ta cong Meiguo lai zher xuexi.
Lena xihuan tiaowu. Ta gen ta meimei chang chang bangzhu ta mama zuo fan, ye bangzhu ta zhengli woshi.
Lena mei tian qi dian qi chuang. Qi chuang yihou, ta chi fan (zaocan-breakfast) he kan xinwen. Ta mama kan dianshi de shihou, ta baba zhen (zheng) zai ta gei ta pengyou da dianhua.
Ta xia wu yi dian shang ke, wu dian xia ke. Xia ke yihou ta gei wo da le dianhua. Wanshang women yiqi qu le dianyingyuan.