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I am a man,which cant sleep when it really need.
Night it is a time for phylosophy,time for rhetorical questions
Has our life the meaning??
When superman will take me out from this fuck planet ? ^^
I am a man who cannot sleep when I really need it.
The night is a time for philosophy---a time for rhetorical questions.
Does our life have meaning?
When will Superman take me off this fucking planet?
After a person, we say "who" or "that," never "which."
Articles are tricky; we usually use them, but not always, e.g. "What is the meaning of life? Life has no meaning."
"Fuck" is an interjection; "fucking" is an adjective. Neither is appropriate in formal writing, but the could be used in dialogue or poetry, which I guess this is....
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