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Why can't I do that? I couldn't send any messages tonight. Was it my fault? I am very very tired.I go to bed. Good night.((+_+))
6 de feb. de 2013 15:02
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Why can't I do that?

I couldn't send any messages tonight.
Was it my fault?
I am very very tired. I'm going to bed.
Good night.((+_+))

 

You wrote this very well!

6 de febrero de 2013

Why can't I do that?

I couldn't send any messages tonight.
Was it my fault?
I am very very tired.I go to bed.
Good night.((+_+))

 

Some thoughts if you do not mind.

You can also say:

(adding a comma with a time frame. With the comma they become conjoined thoughts)


I will go to bed, good night

I will go to bed, in a hour

I will go to bed, soon

I will go to bed, now

I will go to bed, when I am tired

I will go to bed immediately

 

4 de agosto de 2015
Hello, apart from Anna's correction below, you may want to add a comma in between "very very" too. :) "I am very very tired." --> "I am very, very tired." You can also add a comma in between repeated words like "...really, really...". Hope this helps.
23 de enero de 2019
what 's wrong with it ,I'm new to this website .hope you will help me thanks.
1 de diciembre de 2013
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