hello ,everyone !
hahaha , I haven't been here for a long time ! how are you ,friends? well ,talking about my recent life and work .after my resignation ,i got a job as an accountant ,my work is at leisure ,so i have more time to do what i want .i am preparing the cpa test in october this year .I hope i can pass the exam .but what most bored me is my boss always delayed our salary without a reasonable reason .everyone complained it ,but the boss had no respond .
And i plan to lose weight ,i can't stand my weight now .i take more exercise and on a diet ,i hope my weight keep 45kg!
welcome to revise and evaluate my composition ,thanks!
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I will do my best to correct your entry:)
Hahaha, I haven’t been here in a long time! How are you, friends? I’m going to talk about recent events in my life and my work. After resigning from my previous job, I got a job as an accountant. My work is more leisurely now, so I have more time to do what I want. I am preparing for the CPA test in October this year. I hope I can pass the exam. What has been bothering me the most is that my boss delayed our salary without a reasonable reason. Everyone complained, but he/she had no response.
Also, I plan to lose weight. I can’t stand my current weight, so I am exercising more and eating on a diet. I hope weigh 45kg and maintain that weight!
You are welcome to revise and evaluate my composition, thanks!
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Your writing is really good!!
Just some advice, put your punctuation marks right at the end of the words where they should go. For example, your second sentence ‘well , talking about my recent life and work .’ should look like ‘well,’ and period ‘work.’ in regards to punctuation. There are small mistakes like that, but the meaning of your writing is easy to understand.
I want to say congratulations on getting the job as an accountant! I think it is really good that you have more time to do things that you want to do. Also, good luck with the CPA exam. Seeing how hard you work is very inspiring!
