The first class on italki

To improve my English communication skill, to englarge the scope of my vocabulary scope,i compel [*suggest* forced] myself to register on italki. This is The first time i've ever used a microphone,the first time i or talked with strangers by using vedio video. [** not sure what you mean?** So much first time,] i'm eager to be a better engineer so I can help to meet the demand from international engineering corparations' demand corporations. Under the life's great pressure of the life,i have a lot of things to do. But i already, I've realized that one of the most important things for me to do is to strenghten my comprehensive level of English comprehension level of English. [**suggest** One of my priorities is to increase my level of English comprehension.] The teachers on italki are kind, patient, and popular. At the beginning of the class, my pronunciation is not so good, most of what i said say is not to be understood. For changing this situation, I need time and persisting persistence. 

[*suggest* If I want to change this situation, I will need time and persistence.]

[*good job* don't forget to put a space after punctuation (periods, commas, etc.)]

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