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Pets should be treated like family members??? Please edit my short essay :) A pet has been historically, socially and anthropologically one of the most familiar animal as a friend with a human being for several hundreds of years ago. People cannot strongly deny the fact that a pet would be an adaptable animal in human life. However, someone in different culture have different thought. They argue the disadvantage opinions of raising a pet. As far as I am concerned, I would not recommend the readers to take their pet as a family member. In the first place of reason why I disagree, having a pet causes an owner to care a lot of stuff in the variety of ways in life. If one raises a pet, he or she have to take care of feeding it with abundance of nutrition, having a vaccination and so on. For example, in my personal circumstance, all of my family members are extremely busy. My father and mother, both of them, work at a company and a school, so they go back home late evening. Moreover, my brother and I are uni-students so that we should earnestly devote all of their energy to studies. As a result, we don’t unfortunately have any spare time to care of a pet. Not only but that, but a house with raising a pet cannot but being concerned about other neighbors or surroundings. Even depending on what people have in mind differently, someone don’t like a pet due to their personal taste or their physical problem such as dog-allergic. Furthermore, if a pet leads to harmful impacts on near-neighborhoods jumping in a house with making a noise, it also causes enormous problems with local people. Based on what has been discussed above, I have explained, at least, no less than two reasons why I choose to disagree with accepting a pet as a family member. Of course, some of singles living alone can counter with an argument such as “we cannot live life without a pet and a pet is most likely to be a precious child”. However, from the point of my view and my personal experience, having a pet in a house, especially an apartment, is not a preferable choice.
19 de jul. de 2013 1:44
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Certian pets have been historically, socially and anthropologically some of the most familiar animal. As friends of human beings for several hundreds of years ago. People cannot strongly deny the fact that a pet would have been adaptabed to living with humans. However, someone in different cultures have different thoughts. They argue the disadvantage opinions of raising a pet. As far as I am concerned, I would not recommend the readers to treat their pet as a family member.
In the Firstly place of reason why I disagree, having a pet causes an owner to carry a lot of stuff in a variety of ways in life. If one raises a pet, he or she has to take care of feeding it with abundance of nutritious food, giving it a vaccination and so on. For example, in my personal circumstance, all of my family members are extremely busy. My father and mother, both of them, work at a company and a school, so they get home late in the evening. Moreover, my brother and I are uni-students so that we should earnestly devote all of their energy to studies. As a result, we don’t unfortunately don't have any spare time to care for a pet.
Not only that, but a household that is raising a pet should be concerned about other neighbors and their surroundings.Depending on what people have in mind differently, someone don’t like a pets due to their personal taste or their physical problem such as being allergic to dogs. Furthermore, if a pet leads to harmful impacts on near by neighborhoods by jumping in a house and making a noise, it also causes enormous problems with local people.
Based on what has been discussed above, I have explained, at least, no less than two reasons why I choose to disagree with accepting a pet as a family member. Of course, some single people living alone can counter with an argument such as “we cannot live life without a pet and a pet is most like a precious child." However, from my point of view and my personal experience, having a pet in a house, especially an apartment, is not a preferable choice.

19 de julio de 2013
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