A night without sleeping

The night is so quiet. It is raining outside and i could can actually hear the sound of the rain.

I am urging myself to finish the 1000 word essay which would seem so easy to some people, but for me, i have had gone a long way to find the right method to form the essay. Writing an essay means to do doing a lot of readings. What frustrates me the most is that sometimes I spent spend my sleeping time [all night?] on a book, only to find that there was little evidence relevant to the topic. Writing an essay also means that I have to pay a lot of attention to make citations. otherwise, If not, it what I write could be considered as plagiarism. I don't have an effective way to read articles or books; I am using the stupidest way as to note down the relevant information of the materials I read and then categorize them and collect the relative [?] ones.

Sometimes I have to write my ideas quickly before it they slips away. It is changing my learning habits in such a profound manner that it could be a really challenge to my laziness.

When I first handed in my first draft, I felt so ashamed that I had [or: to have] wasted my teacher's time and effort on my poor work that I couldn't look at him directly [look him in the eyes] in the class. I was not surprised with the comment of on the draft: more details, more examples and more researches needed! A lot of work needed!

My principle of my living [my motto] is happiness and food啊！A girl met me and asked: "why don't you smile?" Hmm... for this, I have several ways to repond to this. Firstly, no one would smile for 24 hours a day; second~ second~ok, [??] I admit that I am really worried about the writing work and myself. What a lazy girl I am! What can I use do to save you myself? 

By the way, an experiment taken out undertaken by FAN. Y.Y. indicates that the power of the coffee is much more stronger than that of my will.

When you're writing any kind of article it's important to always capitalize 'I' and the first letter of a new sentence. Otherwise it can look scruffy. Otherwise, good job! :-)

A night without sleeping/sleep

The night is so quiet. It is raining outside (unnecessary - it is hopefully not raining inside!) and I could can actually hear the sound of the rain.

I am urging myself to finish the 1000 word essay which would might seem so easy to some people, but for me, I have had gone a long way to go to great lengths (it is a set phrase in English) to find the right method to form compose the essay. Writing an essay means to do doing a lot of reading/research. What frustrates me the most is that sometimes I spent my sleeping time on a book, only to find that there was little evidence relevant to the topic. Writing an essay also means that I have to pay a lot of attention to make citations when I quote, otherwise, it could be considered as plagiarism. I don't have an effective way approach to reading articles or books, I am using the stupidest simplest/crudest way as to note just noting down the relevant information of the material I read and then categorizing them and collecting/retaining the relative ones.

Sometimes I have to write down my ideas quickly before it slips away. It is changing my learning habits in such a profound manner that it could really be a really challenge to my innate laziness.

When I first handed in my first draft, I felt so ashamed that I to be wasting my teacher's time and effort on my poor work, that i couldn't look at him directly in the class. I was not surprised with the comments he wrote on of the draft, "more detail, more examples and more researches needed!" A lot of work needed!

My main principle/goal? of my living is happiness and food 啊！A girl met me and asked: "why don't you smile?" hmm ~ for this, I have several ways to repond. Firstly, no one would smile for 24 hours a day; second~ second~ok, I admit that I am really worried about the writing work and myself. What a lazy girl. What way How can I  use to save/redeem you? (you can say 'I' and 'You' referring to yourself since you are talking to yourself!) 

By the way, an experiment taken out by FAN. Y.Y. indicates that the power of the coffee is much more stronger than my will

A night without sleeping

Night is so quiet. It is raining outside and i could actually hear the sound of the rain.

I am urging myself to finish the 1000 word essay which would seem so easy to some people, but for me, i have had gone a long way to find the right method to form the essay. writing an essay means to do a lot of readings. what frustrates me the most is that sometimes i spent my sleeping time on a book, only to find that there was little evidence relevant to the topic. writing an essay also means that i have to pay a lot of attention to make citations, otherwise, it could be considered as plagiarism. I don't have an effective way to read articles or books, i am using the stupidest way as to note down the relervant information of the materials i read and then categorize them and collect the relative ones.

Sometimes i have to write my ideas quickly before it slips away. It is changing my learning habits in such a profound manner that it could be a really challenge to my laziness.

When i first handed in my first draft, i felt so ashamed that i wasted my teacher's time and effort on my poor work that i couldn't look at him directly in the class. I was not surprised with the comment of the draft, more details, more examples and more researches needed! A lot of work needed!

My principle of my living is happiness and food啊！A girl met me and asked: "why don't u smile?" hmm~for this, i have several ways to repond. firstly, no one would smile for 24 hours a day; second~ second~ok, i admit that i am really worried about the writing work and myself. what a lazy girl. What can i use to save you?

By the way, experiment taken out by FAN. Y.Y. indicates that the power of the coffee is much more stronger than my will