Thanks for correcting my journal!!:)))

10/4
I looked for a tutor on the Internet today and found 65 years old pretty(?)<em>((</em><em>haha what is a pretty man?)</em> man.
I want to get TOEFL 45 points in TOEFL exam.

10/5
A typhoon is hitting Okinawa and another typhoon is getting close, too.

10/6
The typhoon has gone.
My mom and I went to the book store.
But there was not a single book/no books that I wanted to read.

10/7
Another typhoon is hitting Okinawa again.
I got a call from a manager and was told that he's going to open the store on Thursday.

Thanks for correcting my journal!!:)))

10/4
I was looking for tutor on the Internet today and found a 65 year old pretty man.
I want to get TOEFL 45 points.

10/5
A typhoon hit Okinawa and another typhoon is getting close,too.

10/6 
The typhoon was gone. (You use "was" to tell the reader that it is over.)
My mom and I went to the book store.
But the book that I wanted to read is not there.

10/7
A typhoon is hitting Okinawa again.
I got a call from a manager and was told that he's going to open the store on Thursday.

I hope I was able to help.

えいご の べんきょうがんばって! (sorry, my japanese is very begginer level)