My last Holiday

I went to Cancun a year ago. Cancun it is has beautiful to the beaches. The people were friendly, but in the hotels were expensive...

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My Latest [1] Holiday  o  "My Most Recent Holiday"

I went to Cancun one years ago. Cancun has a beautiful to the beach.  The people were friendly, but in the hotel was expensive...

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[1] "last holiday" podría interpretarse como "las últimas vacaciones" (de su vida).  Ej.:  "John died unexpectedly.  When he went to Cancun three months ago, he didn't know it would be his last holiday ever."]  "lastest holiday" significa más claramente "sus vacaciones más recientes."

Lastes Holiday

I went to Cancun a years ago. Cancun has a beautiful to the beaches.The people were friendly , the hotels was expensive...

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