First notebook entry: Introducing myself
i'm a chinese girl,and i 'm now in Shenzhen.I want to make friends all over the world,especially those who speak English,because i 'm gonna to improve my oral English.If u wanna learn Chinese,or u wanna make friends with me,i would love to .
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
I'm a Chinese woman and I live in i 'm now in Shenzhen. I want to make friends all over the world, especially with people who speak English, because I want to improve my conversational English skills. If you would like to learn Chinese,or if you want to wanna make friends with me I would love that.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
i'm a chinese girl and i live in Shenzhen.I want to make friends all over the world,especially wtith those who speak English,because i 'm gonna to improve my conversational English.If u want to learn Chinese,or u wanna make friends with me,i would love that.¿Quieres avanzar más rápido?
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