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Miss summer I always feel that the winter is so long, and cold. I have to stay in the dormitory every winter. I like to play ball and take a walk in the warm days, Maybe sometimes only with myself. Winter not only make people feel cold, but also make people feel lonely. The school is so far from my home, so when the winter comes, I always have no place to go. I also like to travel, but winter makes no sense. The summer in Jilin is very short, it's always in my defenseless. How I wish that I can live in a warm place all the time. ( Thank you, any help would be appreciated. wishes better.)

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Miss summer

I always feel that the winter is so long, and cold. I have to stay in the dormitory every winter. When it's warm I like to play ball and take a walk in the warm days, Maybe sometimes only with by myself. Winter not only makes people feel cold, but also makes people feel lonely. The school is so far from my home, so when the winter comes, I always have no place to go. I also like to travel, but in winter it makes no sense. The summer in Jilin is very short, it's always in my defenseless. How I wish that I can could live in a warm place all the time.
( Thank you, any help would be appreciated. wishes better.)

 

Really good writing! With a name like Miss Summer it's no wonder you don't like winter!

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