it is PETS5 Writing part, correct it .... lol ~~~ thanks
the question: whether someone should stay in one place all his life?
Write an article to express your point of view on this topic. You should write no less than 250 words.
"Whether we should stay in one place all our life?" this question is so common seen in modern society. No longer seems a strange topic at all. However in previous generation, our parents and grandparents, who were happy that living in one place even in one small district! Because their subconsiousness or our traditional thinking tell them:" it demonstrates their logalty to the ancestors." In addition, they also want to bring up their descendants at here and let the descendants inherit their property. Usually, Chinese look upon their old property ( more old, more important) as their " root", everything would grow base on the root! So, that is why old generation longs for living in one place.
Though, in my opinion, their era is gone, it is modern now, with sufficient opening and reforming of china since 1990s, more and more new notions, swormed into china, we got a lot. Thereafter, "Stay in one place all someone's life" will be no longer seemed popular.
First, at present, evironment pollation, I think, is a big issue not only for us, but also arround the world. Specially in Beijing Shanghai, so- called prosperous and sophistcated city in China. Second, different life style, often we call " generation gap" among our family, that is why sometimes we can't live with our parents very compatible, of course, It doesnot mean, we are not dutiful. Last, obviously, I think, to persue more perfect life and reach higher living standard! Therefore, all of efforts from us are only pointing one destiny: higher living standard.Manifest, it have had big collsion with our old notion.
Finally, if let me choose, I will select " to change place I lived" without thinking twice.
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it is PETS5 Writing part, correct it .... lol ~~~ thanks
the question: whether someone should stay in one place all his life?Write an article to express your point of view on this topic. You should write no less than 250 words.
"Whether we should stay in one place
Though, in my opinion, their era is gone. It is the modern era now with sufficient openings and reformations in China. Since 1990s, more and more new notions were brought upon
Firstly,
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