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Olive oil I use olive oil as a face moisturizer every night before I sleep. I am using olive oil to heal acne scars. Believe it or not, I am still using olive oil as a mask. When the first time I used olive oil, it's so strange. My sister mock me about what i do every night. When I arrived in home after six months lived on boarding house, my sister said to me " your acne scars more small right now ". Wow, olive oil very usefull for someone who has acnes on face.
17 de abr. de 2014 6:06
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I've used olive oil as a moisturizer, too. It's true-- it's very good for your skin!
18 de abril de 2014

Olive oil

I use olive oil as a face moisturizer every night before I sleep. I am using olive oil to heal acne scars.
Believe it or not, I am still using olive oil as a mask. The first time I used olive oil, it was so strange. My sister mocked me about what i did every night.
When I arrived home after six months lived on boarding house, my sister said to me " your acne scars are smaller now ". Wow, olive oil is very useful for someone who has acne on their face.

18 de abril de 2014
oh an it's lived at/in (a) boarding house, 'on' is used when talking about doing something out of something, most cases being figurative. for example: he lived on houses for 5 years (meaning he made a living/profit off it) Sam was roaming the derelict valleys on his brother's allowance (he used his bro's savings/income) But if someone says that one lived on benches than I either think that he literaly slept on them or he made some cash off this *______*
18 de abril de 2014
*about what I did/have done/was doing
18 de abril de 2014

Olive oil

I use olive oil as a face moisturizer every night before I sleep. I am using olive oil to heal acne scars.
Believe it or not, I am still using olive oil as a mask. When the first time I used olive oil, it was/twas (it happened in the past so 'past simple' :D so strange. My sister mocked me about what I did/have donewas doing every night. (you could alternatively use 'used to mock me' (past participle))
When I arrived (at) home after six months (having) lived on (a) boarding house (I've taken boarding house as (an) entity, eg.: patience, valor, dominance, enmity and so on :))

my sister said to me" your acne scars are more small/smaller right now". (for more impact you can say much smaller)

Wow, olive oil's/ oil isvery useful for someone who has acne on face.

Note: things in brackets are obviously optional :)

 

18 de abril de 2014
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