My birthday :)

Today is my birthday. I am really happy. I want to say thank you to my parents, my brother, my friends, all of them are always in my heart. and All of my friend on italki : Can you sing a song for me in this day?Thats great! I really want to hear you sing :)

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my birthday :)

Today is my birthday, i am really happy, i want to thank my parents, brother, friends, all of them who always in my heart and all of my friends on italki : Could you sing a song for me for my birthday?

That will be good! i really want to see you singing :)