Pedro
Presentation Hello, firstly I would like to say that I've found this web this month and it seems absolutely interesting. I'm looking for someone who really likes to learn or improve their language skills with me. I am spanish and I would like to know somebody in order to speak with him or her. I only want him/her twice a week and we could share our knowledges meanwhile we can talk about every interesting thing. I think it could be a good idea. Tell me if you like...
13 de jul. de 2014 10:52
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Hello, firstly I would like to say that I've found this web site this month and it seems absolutely/totally interesting. I'm looking for someone who really likes/wants to learn or improve their language skills with me. I am sSpanish and I would like to know meet somebody/one in order to speak with him or her. I only want to meet with him/her twice a week and we could share our knowledges meanwhile we can talking about every interesting thing. I think it could be a good idea. Tell me if you would like...

 

This is good expression here Pedro. I have used the / to suggest another word, perhaps better, that you could use. ¨Totally interesting¨is more natural. "Wants" is better than "likes" here as "want" indicates a stronger intent to do something. "Somebody/one" is more or less the same. 

 

"I only want him/her.." is ok grammatically, but the "register" is not right. "I only want him/her twice a week" can be softened by stating the intent: "I only want to meet with him/her..."

 

 

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