GREAT SURPRISE!!!

YESTERDAY NIGHT MY BROTHER COME BACK TO HOME FROM AUSTRALIA FOR THE HOLIDAY, THIS IS FANTASTIC BECOSE MY MOTHER SEE HIM ONE HEAR AGO AND I SEE HIM SIX MONTH AGO. IT'S BEAUTIFIL SEE THE FAMILY COMPATTED AND EVERYBODY WITH THE BIG SMILE.

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Hi Antonio! It's great that your brother is back. I can see you wrote this with a lot of enthusiasm. However the upper-case letters are not necessary or grammatically correct, so I'm going to alter that with my correction :)

Yesterday night my brother came back home on holiday from Australia. This is fantastic because the last time my mother saw him was a year ago and I, six months. It's beautiful to see my family complete and the big smiles on everyone's faces. 

YESTERDAY NIGHT MY BROTHER COME BACK TO HOME FROM AUSTRALIA FOR THE HOLIDAY, THIS IS FANTASTIC BECOSE MY MOTHER SEE HIM ONE HEAR AGO AND I SEE HIM SIX MONTH AGO. IT'S BEAUTIFIL SEE THE FAMILY COMPATTED AND EVERYBODY WITH THE BIG SMILE.

Ciao Antonio!  Come stai?

GREAT SURPRISE!!!

YESTERDAY NIGHT - Si dice 'Last night'

MY BROTHER COME BACK TO HOME FROM AUSTRALIA FOR THE HOLIDAYS (in plurale per parlare di vacanze estive nel inglese)

, THIS IS FANTASTIC BECOSE MY MOTHER last saw HIM ONE HEAR AGO AND I saw HIM SIX MONTHS AGO. IT'S BEAUTIFUL TO SEE THE FAMILY COMPLETE AND EVERYBODY WITH A BIG SMILE. ('a' perchè non è un sorriso specifico).

Molto bene, Antonio!  Mi piace che il tuo fratello è a casa.  Complimenti, scrivi molto bene di nuovo signore!

Ciao!