英語の勉強

I want to study English. I want to come to be able to talk in particular.私は英語を勉強したいです。特に話ができるようになりたいと思います。

I want to study English, such that get to the point where I can speak in detail. 

そんな感じですか？

英語の勉強

I want to study English.

やった！

I want to come to be able to talk in particular.

Corrected:

Particularly, I want to be able to talk.

This is even better:

Specifically, I want to be able to speak it.