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a day in my life Every, the little girl gets up very early, then she dresses up in formal and goes to work. Although she is very tired and doesn't want to leave the bed anymore, but she must arrive to the office on time. She has to work under pressure but she always finish her part time job as she have promised with the boss before she signed the contract. Then, in the noon, she leave the office and runs as quickly as possible to school. She will be ashamed if she comes late because she is a monitor. During her time in school, even she is not able to open her eyes of ear to hear what is happening. she is exhausted. In the evening, she has a part time job in a restaurant, if it's not too much of customers, it does not make her tired, but sometimes, for instance on saturday evening, it looks as if she is going to swoon. Some of my friends told me that : " you are so greedy, you look like a workaholic". But do you know why do I have to take on a lot of work? because I have a lot of purposes. Although in your eyes I am tired but I am always in the eyes of tiger.
18 de nov. de 2014 9:33
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A Day In My Life

Everyday the little girl gets up very early, she dresses up in formal clothes and goes to work. Although she is very tired and doesn't want to leave the her bed anymore, she must arrive to the office on time. She has to work under a lot of pressure but she always finishes her part time job as she have promised with the her boss before she signed the contract. Then, in the at noon, she leaves the office and runs as quickly as possible to school. She will would be ashamed if she comes arrived late because she is a monitor. During her time in school, even she is not able to open her eyes  keep her eyes open of ear or to hear what is happening because she is exhausted. In the evening, she has a part time job in a restaurant, if it's there are not too much many of customers, it does not make her tired, but sometimes, for instance on saturday evening, it looks as if she is going to swoon. Some of my friends told me that: "you are so greedy, you look like a workaholic." But do you know why do I have to take on a lot of work? Because I have a lot of purposes ambition(?). Although in your eyes I am tired, but I am always in the eyes of a tiger(?).

 

I didn't understand what you meant with the last two sentences so I put a question mark next to them. 

18 de noviembre de 2014

a day in my life

 

 

Every, The little girl gets up very early, then she dresses up in formal and goes to work. Although She is very tired and so she doesn't want to leave the bed every morning anymore, but she must have to arrive to the office on time. She has to work under the pressure but regardless of it she always finishes her part time job as she haved promised with to the boss before she signed the contract signing. Then, in the noon, sShe leaves the office and runs as quickly as possible to the school(university?) in the noon. She will be ashamed(stained) if she comes late because she is a monitor. During her time in at school, even she is not able to open her eyes of or ears to hear what is happening. sShe is exhausted. In the evening, she has a part time job in a restaurant, if it's  there is not too much of customers. It does not make her tired, but sometimes, for instance on saturday evening, it looks as if she is going to swoon. Some of my friends told me that:" Yyou are so greedy, you look like a workaholic". But they do not you know why do I have to take do on a lot of work.(this sentence is not understandable and has no connections with previous) because I have a lot of purposes. Although in your(their?) eyes I may be am tired but I am always in the eyes of tiger.(I dont like this and dont know what you mean)

 

 

PS: Try writing in more simple sentences. 

18 de noviembre de 2014
please help correct it brothers :)
18 de noviembre de 2014
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