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Buying tickets The biggest fesitival, which is the Spring Fesitival, in China is coming. Almost the all of Chinese will going to home to spend the holiday with their family, and it makes difficult to buy tickets in these period. Tickets begin to sell 60 days in advance. Every year, these time seems like a war for getting the ticket. I'm the one in the WAR. As for me, I will going to the husband's family to spend 3-4 days with them, and then to meet my family for the next few days. The round trip will cost about 30-45 hours, it depends on which one you take, by train. Even though it's a long journey, but we are still eager to meet our family as soon as possible.
28 de dic. de 2014 6:56
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[6] We use slightly different expressions, depending on where we will meet our family.

If we will be going to our family's home, we will say:
"I am going to visit my family."
The listener will understand that you are going to their home.

If we will be going to another location to meet our family, such as to a restaurant, we will say:
"I am going to meet my family."
The listener knows that you are not going to their home, and may ask, "Where are you going to meet them?"

28 de diciembre de 2014

Buying tickets

The biggest fesitival festival in China, which is the Spring Fesitival Festival, in China is coming. Almost the all of Chinese people will be going to home to spend the holiday with their family families [1], and it this makes it difficult to buy tickets in these this [2] period. Tickets begin began to sell 60 days in advance. Every year, these this time seems like a war for getting the a ticket. I'm the one in the WAR war [3].
As for me, I will going to the my husband's family to spend 3-4 three or four [4] days with them, and then to meet my family for the next following [5] few days. The round trip will cost take about 30-45 hours by train, it depends on which ones you take, by train.
Even though it's a long journey, but we are still eager to meet visit [6] our family families as soon as possible.

 

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[1] When writing English, we must remember whether we are talking about one thing (singular form) or more than one thing (plural form).  You used the word 'everybody', so we must continue the plural form.  Compare the following sentences:

"Everybody in China will be going to visit their families."

"Every person in China will be going to visit his or her family."

 

[2] Even though you mean a period of many days, we use the singular form.  The word 'period' collects all the days together, and treats them as a single item (like putting many things into a single box).  Here are some examples:

"There are many apples on the table."  (Plural form.)

"There is a box of apples on the table."  (Singular form.)

"It is difficult to buy tickets during these days."  (Plural form.)

"It is difficult to buy tickets during this period."  (Singular form.)

 

[3] I'm not sure why you capitalized this word.  If you want to emphasize that, this time, you are in the war, use an exclamation mark:

"This time, I'm in the war!"

 

[4] Spell any number up to ten.

 

[5] "The next few days" means the days after today.  "The following few days" means the days after a specified event (in this case, visiting your husband's family).

28 de diciembre de 2014

Buying tickets

The upcoming spring festival is the biggest in China.  Almost all of the Chinese people will going home to spend the holiday with their family.  Tt makes it difficult to buy tickets during this period of time. Tickets begin to sell 60 days in advance. Every year during this period, it is like a war to get a ticket. Right now,  I'm the one in the war. 
As for me, I will going to the home of my husband's family to spend 3-4 days with them.  Then I will meet up with my family for the next few days.  The round trip will take about 30-45 hours, it depends on which train you take.
Even though it's a long journey, we are still eager to meet our family as soon as possible.

28 de diciembre de 2014

Buying Tickets

The biggest fesitival festival in China, which is the Spring Fesitival, in China is coming. Almost the all of the Chinese people will be going to home to spend the holiday with their families, and it which makes it difficult to buy tickets in these period at this time of year. Tickets begin to sell 60 days in advance. Every year, these at this time it seems like a war for getting the tickets. I'm the one in the WAR.
As for me, I will going to visit the my husband's family to spend for 3-4 days with them, and then to meet visit my family for the next few days. The round trip will cost take about 30-45 hours; it depends on which one you take, whether I go by train or not. 
Even though it's a long journey, but we are still eager to meet our family as soon as possible.

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Corrections  Suggestions

(I made the correction to "China" in blue as I prefer not to use red for names of people and places, if possible.)


1. The name "Spring Festival" is the main topic so I would rewrite your first sentence this way:

The Spring Festival, the biggest festival in China, is coming.

2. Almost everyone will go home to spend.... (I think this is better, unless you feel the specific need to specifically indicate Chinese people as opposed to others living in China.)

 

29 de diciembre de 2014

Buying tickets

The biggest fesitival in China, which is the Spring Fesitival is coming. Almost the all of Chinese will going to home to spend their holidays with their family, and it makes becomes difficult to buy tickets in these this period. Tickets begin to sell 60 days in advance. Every year, these this time there seems like  to be a war for getting the tickets. I'm the one in WAR.
As for me, I will going to my husband's family to spend 3-4 days with them, and then to meet my family for the next few days. The round trip will be about 30-45 hours, it depends on which route you take by train.


Even though it's a long journey, we are still eager to meet our family as soon as possible.

28 de diciembre de 2014
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