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Toefl topic: Young people enjoy life more than older people do. I agree with the statement that young people enjoy life more than older people do. When people are young they are full of dreams and opportunities to make them true. This dreams and goals are an objective in their lives and they persuit them, and they enjoy the ride. When people are young they are mostly healthy, that means they can eat everything they want to, they can climb mountains, swim rivers, drink more beers than they should, dance until feet get sore, briefly, it seems there are no limits. They can fall in love, break up and the next month find someonelse. On the other hand, I can mention one disadvantage of being young and it is money. Young people, mainly students, do not have savings or work to make money. Therefore, they can not eat everything they want to nor travel, not because they do not want or their body do not allow them, but because they do not have money to do all of these things. Older people, have money but not health, people to share or willingness to enjoy life. Even though young people have the opportunity to enjoy life without money, they just have to realize the good things they have and appreciate the time they have to experience love, happiness and everything life brings day by day. In conclusion, young people who have everything set to have a great life (health, willigness, faith) enjoy life more than older people is capable of. But does not matter the age, there are always exceptions for the rule and I had the opportunity to learn from really cool older people that enjoy life as kids!
6 de ene. de 2015 0:58
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Toefl topic: Young people enjoy life more than older people do.

 

I agree with the statement that young people enjoy life more than older people do. When people are young, they are full of dreams and have opportunities to make them come true. This These dreams and goals are an objective in their lives and they persuit pursue them and. They enjoy the ride.

When people are young they are mostly healthy, that means they can eat everything anything they want to, they can climb mountains, swim rivers, drink more beers than they should, dance until their feet get sore. , briefly, It seems there are no limits. They can fall in love, break up and the next month find someone else.

On the other hand, I can mention one disadvantage of being young and it is money. Young people, mainly students, do not have savings or nor do they work to make money. Therefore, they cannot eat everything anything they want to nor travel, not because they do not want to or their body do does not allow them, but because they do not have money to do all any of these things.

Older people have money but not health, no people to share with or a willingness to enjoy life. Even though young people have the opportunity to enjoy life without money, they just have to realize recognize the good things they have and appreciate the time they have to experience love, happiness and everything life brings day by day.

In conclusion, young people who have everything set to have a great life (health, willigness, faith) enjoy life more than older people is are capable of. But However, no matter does not matter the age, there are always exceptions for to the rule and I had the opportunity to learn from really cool older people that enjoy life as kids!

6 de enero de 2015
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