María
The Book I'm Reading I'm reading "Alice in Wonderland" in English, because I think it's a good way to learn the language. Many of the difficult words I know in Spanish are because of I read once anywhere. I had never read a book in English before, but I hope reading it helps me a bit. I love that book because it seems like I'm in Alice's dream when I'm reading. There are a lot of strange things that only happen in dreams, like suddenly changes of rooms, rares adventures, talking animals... I can't choose a favourite part, I love the whole book. Although I can't understand all I read, I get the global context. I think it's a good thing at least. I as well decided to write something here sometimes. Maybe with all this, my level of English can improve. Thank you for reading and I hope you can help me with my mistakes. (This is a beautiful picture in the book. If you haven't read it yet, I recommend you)
1 de feb. de 2015 10:57
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The Book I'm Reading

I'm reading "Alice in Wonderland" in English, because I think it's a good way to learn the language. I know the Spanish translation of many of the difficult words, because I've read them before somewhere.  I've [I have] never read a book in English before, but I hope reading this one helps me a bit.

I love this book because it seems like I'm in Alice's dream while I'm reading. There are a lot of strange things that happen only in dreams, like rooms suddenly changing, rare adventures, and talking animals. 

I can't choose a favourite part, because I love the whole book. Although I can't understand all I read, I understand the context. I think it's a good thing at least, and I've decided to write here sometimes, too.  Maybe my level of English will improve by doing this .

Thank you for reading and I hope you can help me with my mistakes.

María, very good writing. Note the corrections to punctuation and sentence structue. Overall, this is very well written and understandable. 

(This is a beautiful picture in the book. If you haven't read it yet, I recommend you)

1 de febrero de 2015
Very good when vs while both are same but "while" is used to show that an action in progress is interrupted by another action. take some examples : They were drinking coffee when the phone rang. While they were drinking coffee the phone rang. ( our work interrupt here )
1 de febrero de 2015
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