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Where should the Chinese culture go China have almost 5 thousand years history,and leaves us so much culture treasure,especially confucians,but now,with the economic developing in China,more and more people don't know about our own culture,it's an obvious phenomenon in Chinese university whether 211 or not , what's students care about is how to get the skills just for job,they even don't know the common sense of life,and don't know how to respect their parents or deal with the relation among their friends and teachers ,most of us give in in front of Chinese specific system,and are not eager to know the truth like zombie,why would this happen to Chinese student,because what we are fourced to learn when we are children is how to make good grades and ranking,and adults tell us only in this way we can be a big man and make lots of money ,as if what they need is a machine that can make money,and ignore the most important thing:to teach us how to be a man,after we enter the college without control and as if we are arrived at the heaven and then many of us come to be a zombie just knowing to play gamse and sleep.and if someone advanced in thinking think that what he should do ,he would get into think. think what ?to think do i waste so many years just for an exam,and know how to solve the difficult math problems but even don't know to how to cook a meal .so i begin to learn Chinese culture ,the confucianist,to find myself
15 de feb. de 2015 8:14
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Where should the Chinese culture go

China have almost 5 thousand years history,and leaves has left <em>(it's a result, so it's better to use Perfect)</em> us so much a lot of culture treasures, especially confuciansnism, but now, with the economic developing in China,more and more people don't know about our own culture,it's an obvious phenomenon in Chinese universityies whether 211 or not <em>(don't understand what you want to say)</em> , what's students care about is how to get the skills just for job,they don't even know the common sense of life,and don't know how to respect their parents or deal with the relation among relationships with their friends and teachers ,most of us give in in front of Chinese specific system,and are not eager to know the truth like zombie,. Why would this happen to Chinese student?because what we are fourced to learn when we are children is how to make good grades and ranking,and adults tell us that only in this way we can be a big man and make lots of money ,as if what they need is a machine that can make money,and ignore the most important thing:to teach us how to be a man,after we enter the college without control and as if we are arrived at the heaven and then many of us come to be a become zombies just knowing to playing gamsees and sleeping.and if someone advanced in thinking thinks that what he should do ,he would get into think <em>(don't understand what you want to say either)</em>. think what ?to think do i need to <em>(is that what you mean?)</em> waste so many years just for an exam,and know how to solve the difficult math problems but even don't don't even know to how to cook a meal .so i begin have  begun to learn <em>('study' sounds better in my opinion)</em> Chinese culture ,the confucianistm,to find myself

15 de febrero de 2015
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15 de febrero de 2015
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