Work from home

Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers.

Today in our fast-paced world, the development of technology is dramatically affecting the at business relationship between human beings, and more and more people prefer to work from home. There are several controversial points of view on this issue. In this essay, I will outline the benefits and disadvantages of working at home via internet and will make some conclusions.

First of all, I should mention that staying at home helps the employee to spend their time more efficiently wisely and to be able to find individual approaches of organizing their schedule according to natural biorhythms. Furthermore, an obvious advantage since of working from home is that it saves you time by avoiding the traffic jams, which are always present, going to and returning from work, waiting for the late bus and the inevitable distractions from your coworkers.

Moreover, the an opportunity to working at home via the Internet is beneficial for individuals with restricted working capacity such as pregnant women, elderly people and disabled persons as it  to helps them stay mentally and socially active. capable and keep social activity. For example, my friend Kate during the period of maternity leave used to work via Skype during her maternity leave, which allowed her to maintain her establish business relationships.

On the other hand, there are some drawbacks to working from home. For example, I should mention that spending time on the Internet, even for work, is one of the main causes of increasing weight gain, which for the of an average individual and it could be dangerous for their health. Moreover, sometimes freelancers feel very lonely because working from home can detrimentally affect their social skills and self-esteem.

To conclude, I am inclined to believe that it is reasonable to provide people opportunities to work from home, but it certainly should be considered a personal in regard to their choice.

Very well written Marina!  Your use of terminology and phrasing is excellent and most of my corrections are simply to make your post sound more natural to an English speaker.  Keep up your excellent work!

Work from home

Computers and modems have made it possible for office workers to do much of their work from home instead of working in offices every day. Working from home should be encouraged as it is good for workers and employers.

Today in our fast-paced world, the development of technology is dramatically affecting business relationships between human beings, and more and more people prefer to work from home. There are several controversial points of view on this issue. In this essay, I will outline the benefits and disadvantages of working at home via internet and will draw some conclusions. (or make some concluding remarks)

First of all, I should mention that staying at home helps employees to spend their time more wisely and find individual approaches to organizing their schedule according to natural biorhythms. Furthermore, an obvious advantage is that working from home saves you time by avoiding the traffic jams going to and returning from work, waiting for the late bus, and distractions from your coworkers. (Comma isn't strictly necessary but in this sentence it adds clarity.)

Moreover, an opportunity to work at home via Internet is beneficial for individuals with restricted working capacity such as pregnant women, elderly people and disabled persons to help them stay mentally capable and socially active. For example, my friend Kate during her maternity leave used to work via Skype, which allowed her to establish business relationships.

On the other hand, there are some drawbacks to working from home. For example, I should mention that spending time on the Internet even for work is one of the main causes of gaining weight of an average individual and it could be dangerous for their health. Moreover, sometimes freelancers feel very lonely because working from home can affect their social skills and self-esteem.

To conclude, I am inclined to believe that it is reasonable to provide people opportunities to work from home, but it certainly should be considered in regard to their choice. (Not sure what this means?)