yanzi's notebook entry: Jan 24, 2011

Jan 27, I will go for home, I am so excited. Spring Festival is a traditional festival in China. The first day of lunar january, red lanterns are hunging everywhere, everyone is dressing in bright clothes, they always smile. The relatives of distant are returned home for reunite with their parents on this day. The feeling of home is so warmer. Living with parents could make ours remove the trouble and pression in life. The whole family get together for Spring Festival. The abundant of food always make me click the lips,hehe. After eating the school food one year, the feeling have changed bored. I've been eagerd to go home, missed my mum's cooking skill. Very delicious!!!

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I am really excited to go home on January 27 for Spring Festival, which is a traditional festival in China.  From the first lunar day in January, red lanterns are hanged / hung everywhere and everyone is smiling and dressed in bright-colored clothes.  Distant relatives come home to reunite with their families on this day.  The feeling of being home is so heart-warming.   Being with our parents easily removes our problems and burdens in life.  The whole family gets together for Spring Festival and the abundant food never fails to make me lick my lips, hehe.. After eating school food for a year, I am bored of it. I'm eager to go home because I miss my mum's cooking.  Yummy!

Yanzi's notebook entry: Jan 24, 2011

Jan 27, I will go for home. I am so excited. Spring Festival is a traditional festival in China. The first day of lunar full moon in January (?). Red lanterns are hunging hang everywhere. Everyone is dressing dresses in bright clothes. They are always smiling. Relatives of from a distance are returned home for to reunite with their parents on this day. The feeling of being at home is so warmer. Living with parents could can make ours us remove the troubles and pressures in our life. The whole family gets together for Spring Festival. The abundance of food always make me click my lips, hehe. After eating the school food for one year, my feelings for school have changed to boredom. I've been eager to go home. I missed my mum's cooking skills. Very delicious!!!