My Best Friend

My best friend is Lola. She is like my sister. Everyday I see her in school and we are always together.
She is small, beautiful and slim. She has wavy black hair and brown eyes.
Today I didn't see her because she is ill.

My best friend.

My best friend is Lola and she is like my sister. Everday I see her in the school and ever we are always together. (not sure what you were trying to say here)
She is small, beautiful and slim. She has wavy black hair and brown eyes.
Today I didn't see because she is ill.

great job! keep up the work!