My Eyes My eyes are very small, and a single-edged eyelid When I am smiling, someone can't see my eyes. They always called me " small eyes". So I am not confident about my appearance. That also becom

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My Eyes My eyes are very small, and a single-edged eyelid When I am smiling, someone can't see my eyes. They always called me " small eyes". So I am not confident about my appearance. That also become a reason for someone dislike me. Sometimes I hate myself about " small eyes, big face." but I need to change that. I could turn into innner beauty. such as improve my cooking. When someone introduced me to other," oh, She is good at cooking, She cooks food delicious."

26 de ago. de 2015 8:37

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My Eyes

My eyes are very small, and have a single-edged eyelid[1]. When I am smiling, someone can't see my eyes. They always called me "small eyes". So I am not confident about my appearance. That also became a reason for someone to dislike me. Sometimes I hate myself about "small eyes, big face." but I need to change that. I could turn into my innner beauty. such as improve my cooking. When someone introduces me to someone else, She might say " oh, She is good at cooking, She cooks delicious food."

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[1] Sorry - I don't understand what you mean.

Although you need a space after almost every punctuation mark, you should not put one after a beginning (opening) bracket or quote e.g. " or ' or [{<. "small eyes" "hello" "Good" (etc).

27 de agosto de 2015