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Eassy 7 - Time changed everything As time goes by,we are all become impassive.Loose our enthusiastic,maybe to life,maybe to friends. There was fewer and fewer things can arouse our instrest.You like to being along. Party begin to make you feel noisy.You like silence,like stay up at night,like cook at home,like sports,like to be healthy. Everything is gradually changed. You'd like to call your family than your friend.Also,there only a few good friends you will always contact. The only thing didn't changed is that my English is still suck.Lolllllllllllllllllllllll......

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Eassy Essay 7 - Time changed everything

As time goes by, we are all become impassive. We lose our enthusiasm enthusiastic,maybe  for to life, maybe to for friendship.
There was are fewer and fewer things that can arouse our interest instrest.You enjoy being alone.  like to being along.
Parties begin to be noisy. Party begin to make you feel noisy.You like silence, like staying  up at night, like cook at home, like sports,  and like to be healthy.
Everything is gradually changed.
You'd like prefer to call your family than your friend. Also, there are only a few good friends you will always contact.
The only thing that doesn't didn't changed is that my English is still sucks.Lolllllllllllllllllllllll......

 

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