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✿Mizuki✿
✿Diary✿ Hi. How's going? Today was so busy. I will talk about " 1 day of me. " 4am I woke up, then I went to the park for jogging. I coocked my breakfast. It was just boring salad. (Only lettuce.) 8am I went to the chocolateshop for working. So busy everyday, because There is many peple in Osaka department store. I was exciting and fun. I like my job✩ 10pm I went to gim at the finished my work. It was so hard for me. I cooked dinner. It was Minestrone❤ Today was so cold. 1am~3am I practiced the Euphonium for 2 hours. And I texted my friend who living in America. He is most famous tuba player in the world. He will come to Japan in Decenber. I can't wait. By the way, I was gave Long mouton boots from my brother✩ I don't know why. Probably today was a his payday. Thank you for reading! If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it? Thank you!

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✿Diary✿

Hi. How's it/everything going?
Today was so busy.

I will talk about  "one of my days. "

At 4am I woke up, then I went to the park for to jogging.
I cooked my breakfast. It was just a boring salad. (Only lettuce.)

At 8am I went to the chocolate shop for to working.
Work is so busy everyday because there is are(use are when there's a lot of things) many people in the Osaka department store.
It was exciting and fun. I like my job✩

At 10pm I went to the gym at the after I finished my work (Did you go to the gym first and then did you finish your work) . It was so hard for me.
I cooked dinner. It was Minestrone❤ Today was so cold.

From (since you're talking about a long period of time use "from") 1am~3am I practiced the Euphonium for 2 hours. And I texted my friend who is living in America.
He is the most famous tuba player in the world. He will come to Japan in Decenber.
I can't wait.

By the way, I was given Long mouton boots from my brother✩
I don't know why. Probably today was a his payday.

Thank you for reading! If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?
Thank you!

 

Your day sounds busy but, very exciting! Also, do you make the chocolates at your work? 

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✿Diary✿

Hi. How's it going?

Today was so busy.

I will talk about "one of my days. "

At 4am I woke up, then I went to the park for jogging.
I cooked my breakfast. It was just a boring salad. (Only lettuce.)

At 8am I went to the chocolate shop to work.
So busy everyday, because there are many people in the Osaka department store.
I was exciting and fun. I like my job✩

At 10pm I went to the gym and finished my work. It was so hard for me.
I cooked dinner. It was Minestrone❤ Today was so cold.

1am~3am I practiced the Euphonium for 2 hours. And I texted my friend who is living in America.
He is most famous tuba player in the world. He will come to Japan in December.
I can't wait.

By the way, I was given Long mouton boots from my brother✩
I don't know why. Probably today was a his payday.

Thank you for reading! If you find a mistake in my notebook, could you correct it?
Thank you!

 

Do you play the Euphonium from 1-3pm (afternoon), or 1-3am (in the middle of the night)?

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