Writing practise

The Three Little Pigs.

When I was a child, it was a matter of fact that I had an identification (a connection) with the youngest of the three little pigs. Because I thought the main character of that story is the youngest and undoubtedly every child is a hero of fairy tales. Besides, building a house with bricks is so reasonable. It's nonsense to build a house with straws, I thought. As I grew, I saw a lot of the youngest pigs who study harder and work harder than me. I had thought I built my house with bricks, but these days I feel that it turns out to be of straws. When I realized it, it was an empty detection. There was a bit of bitterness that I became the oldest pig and not the hero of the story. And now I think this is preferable. I am the oldest pig. I want to be recognized without any concerns about the negative future- 'What if a bad wolf comes?', 'It will be blown off or burnt helplessly...'' and so on.

the blue is what I corrected and in the brackets is another way of saying it.

Good job on writing this and just a few mistakes ^^

It's nice how you made the connection between the story and reality. Hope all is working out and even though we are becoming the oldest that doesn't mean we can't have fun from time to time right :)

Keep on writing, hard work always pays off :)