Living with my friends
I want to know my friend's feeling. I couldn't understand it but I always pretended I know your feeling, I accept your feeling. Because if I didn't pretend, we couldn't keep good relationship, I thought. These days we haven't been keeping touch each other and I've always been thinking how my friend is feeling now. If I ask my friend how you feel now, it will be easy to understand how my friend feels but I can't. Because I've still pretended and it is time to not contact with my friend. If I contact with my friend, our relation will be worth and worth. I know my friend doesn't want to contact me right now, not now. I have to find own way and I want handle my way. I've met a lot of friends and they are not same. There are some kind of friends and I am so. My friends teach me a lot about our life.
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Living with my friends
I want to know my friend's feelings. I don't understand it, but I always pretended that I know your feeling did, that I accepted your feelings. Because, if I didn't pretend, we couldn't have had a good relationship, I thought. These days we haven't been keeping in touch with each other and I'm always been thinking wondering how my friend they are feeling now. If I ask my friend them how they feel now, it would be easy to understand how my friend they feel, but I can't. Because I've always pretended, and now I cannot contact my friend them. If I contacted with my friend, our relationship would become worse and worse (I believe you meant "worse" here, although I could be wrong). I know my friend doesn't want to contact me right now, not now. I have to find own way and I want to handle things myself. I've met a lot of friends and they are all different. There are many kinds of friends and I am so (I'm not 100% certain what you meant in this sentence, but I corrected it to what I thought most likely). My friends teach me a lot about our life.Good job! I think one small thing you could do to greatly improve your writing would be to work on using pronouns, such as "he", "she", "him", "her", "they", or "them", instead of repeating the person's name or title (such as "my friend" in this particular piece) over and over again. It's a simple little trick that will have a big impact on how natural your English sounds!
Keep up the good work! :)
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