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My father
I went to see my father tonight.
He heard a little bit voice from me, just opened the door. His right ear can not hear voice any more, only the left ear can hear a little bit. He had got diabetes.
We chatted more, I was sitting beside him. He said he is afraid. I understand he fears something. I feel that every old person will has the feeling. I comforted him. I said:" Maybe not only you, actually all people will think of that when they are old......" It sounds like nonsense. (T_T) Then I spoke the topics what he likes. He felt happy. He hope I can take him and my mother to take the subway in Changsha city later. He hope he can go to countryside to rest in Jiangsu province. I will arrange it.
I was staying with him the whole night. Later, he was watching a Chinese series. Sometimes he suddenly laughed like a child. I was just looking at him in silence. I feel it's fine.
28 de mar. de 2016 16:16
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My father
I went to see my father tonight.He had only barely heard a little bit my voice from me, just and he opened the door. With His right ear can not hear my voice any more, only with the left ear can hear a little bit. He had got has diabetes.
We chatted more, I was sitting beside him. He said he is afraid. I understand he fears something. I feel that every old person will has the that feeling. I comforted him. I said:" Maybe it is not only you, actually all people will think of that when they are old......" It sounds like nonsense. (T_T) Then I spoke about the topics what1* that he likes. He felt happy. He hopes I can take him and my mother to take the subway in Changsha city later. He hopes he can go to countryside to rest in Jiangsu province. I will arrange it.
I was staying2* stayed with him the whole night. Later, he was watching2* watched a Chinese series. Sometimes he suddenly laughed like a child. I was just looking at him in silence. I feel it's fine.
1* - what isn't like other pronouns because you don't repeat the noun.
eg - The thing that I bought - thing+ that
or - What I bought- without 'thing'
2* past continuous for simultaneous actions or contrast long with short.
eg While I was watching TV my brother was studying. Or while I was having a bath the phone rang.
13 de julio de 2016
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Competencias lingüísticas
Chino (mandarín), Chino (cantonés), Chino (otro), Inglés, Francés, Japonés, Español
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Chino (cantonés), Inglés, Francés, Japonés, Español
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