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Missed calls Sometimes, when I want to go out with my friends, everybody is busy. If I call to somebody, nobody pick up the phone. Nobody recall and nobody text. And if I tired and want to spend all day alone, my phone rang again and again and again. I've got massages from all social networks, everybody need me. Why? Is this happens to you?

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Missed calls

Sometimes, when I want to go out with my friends, everybody is busy. If I call someone, they don't pick up the phone. No one calls or texts me back, but if I am tired and want to spend all day alone, my phone rings again and again and again. I've got messages from all the social networks and everybody needs me.
Why? Does this happen to you?


You don't have to use "somebody" and "everybody" so much. It's better to use simple pronouns, like "they", once your subject is established. Until you change the subject, you don't need to say "somebody" or "everybody" again. If you do decide to use either of those words, they are interchangeable and mean the same thing, but "someone" and "everyone" are more formal and less tiring to say if you have to repeat them multiple times. :)


Great job! I know how you feel. No one want's to talk until I don't want to talk. Hahaha

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Missed calls

Sometimes, when I want to go out with my friends, everybody is busy. If I call to somebody, nobody picks up the phone. Nobody returns my call recall and nobody texts. And When if I'm tired and want to spend all day alone, my phone rang rings again and again and again. I get messages I've got massages from all my social networks, everybody needs me.
Why? Is Does this happens to you?

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Missed calls

Sometimes, when I want to go out with my friends, everybody is busy. If I call to somebody, nobody/answer/ pick up the phone. Nobody recall and nobody text. And if I tired and want to spend all day alone, my phone ring again and again and again. I've got massages from all social networks, everybody need me.
Why?  Did it happen to you?

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