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The Causes and Effects of Child Laborers
The world is becoming better and better, but there are also many problems. Some people are living a hard life. Many children have to be laborers and they can’t receive a good education.
There are many causes of child laborers. They must leave home and work to make to make money because their families are very poor or their families ask them to drop out of school. Sometimes children lose warm houses and have no enough food to eat. No children want to be laborers.
Whatever the cause of child laborers is, the effects are the same. They get little care from others and often feel lonely. They often work in dangerous conditions but they can’t get enough money.
The governments are trying to solve their problems. I hope everyone can live a happy life.
14 de jul. de 2016 9:39
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The Causes and Effects of Child Laborers
The world is becoming better and better, but there are also many problems. Some people are living a hard life. Many children have to be laborers and they can’t receive a good education.There are many causes of child laborers. They must leave home and work to make to make money because their families are very poor or their families ask them to drop out of school. Sometimes children lose warm houses and don't have no enough food to eat. No children wants to be a laborers.
Whatever the cause of child laborers is, the effects are the same. They get little care from others and often feel lonely. They often work in dangerous conditions but they can’t get enough money.
The governments are trying to solve their problems. I hope everyone can live a happy life.
Really well written. Almost no grammar mistakes.
14 de julio de 2016
The Causes and Effects of Child Laborers
The world is becoming better and better, but there are also many problems. Some people are living a hard life. Many children have to be laborers and they do not receive a good education.There are many causes of child laborers. They must leave home and work to make to make money because their families are very poor or their families ask them to drop out of school. Sometimes children lose warm houses and have do not have enough to eat. No children want to become laborers.
Whatever the cause of child laborers, the effects are the same. They get little care from others, often feel lonely and work in dangerous conditions. They earn very little money for their efforts.
The governments are trying to solve their problems. I hope everyone can live a happy life.
14 de julio de 2016
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Huang Peiru
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Chino (mandarín), Inglés
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