Trying to start again
I start to miss the good old days when I used Enlish.
我开始怀念那些学英语的的日子
Chating with my foreign teacher, writing diary then pubish it on website and some foreigners will correct it, what a wonderful time!
和我的外语老师聊天，写日记然后发表到网站上，一些外国朋友会帮我修改，多么美好的时光啊！
Now, I try to start again, not for exam, just for learning it and using it.
现在，我尝试这从新开始，不是为了考试，而是为了学习然后使用它。
Sometime I chat with you just for chat, or wirte something to express my points.
有时我只是为了聊天或者表达自己的观点。
After all, the most important of all is writing and stick to do it.
毕竟，最终要的是写并且坚持写。
Maybe it has many mistakes, I will welcome you to help me to correct it.
或许这里面有很多错误，欢迎你帮助我改正它。
Please help me correct it. Thank you very much.
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Trying to start again
I start to miss the good old days when I used (was learning)Enlish.( English)我开始怀念那些学英语的的日子
Chating with my foreign teacher, writing diary ( and) then pubish (publish) it on website and some foreigners will correct it, what a wonderful time! (it's great)
和我的外语老师聊天，写日记然后发表到网站上，一些外国朋友会帮我修改，多么美好的时光啊！
Now, I try to start again, (it is) not for exam, just for learning it and using it. (learning to use it)
现在，我尝试这从新开始，不是为了考试，而是为了学习然后使用它。
Sometime I chat with you just for chat, （am just for chatting) or wirte something to express my points.
有时我只是为了聊天或者表达自己的观点。
After all, the most important of all( thing) is writing and stick to do it. (keep writhing)
毕竟，最终要的是写并且坚持写。
Maybe it has many mistakes, I will welcome you to help me to correct it.( Any correction is welcome)
或许这里面有很多错误，欢迎你帮助我改正它。
Please help me correct it. Thank you very much.
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As a both Mandarin and English speaker, I can get what you mean. I notice that some of your sentence is literally translate from Mandarin. Try to think like an English speaker, that's my advice.
身为一个说英语和中文的人，我能明白你所要表达的意思。我发现你的一些句子是从英语直接翻译的。你必须以英语母语者的想法去表达你的意思，这就是我所给的意见。
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i learn english and try to improve my language
we can be friends and chatting with you
and your writting was good i didn't notice any faults
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that's awesome , keep going forward and don't give up.
hope the best for you
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