报纸 - Newspaper

我很喜欢看报纸，尤其喜欢看国际新闻，因为从中我可以学到其他文化知识。放学后，我一般读名人新闻，虽然名人很有意思，但是他们很肤浅。有的时候跟我爸爸一起看报纸，然后我们会聊一些文章。

写的很不错！！

报纸 - Newspaper

报纸 - Newspaper

The punctuations are almost precise. Most of the sentences are correct if you just consider them as the independent sentences, but considering the context, you should add linkers and avoid redundant to improve the coherence.

我很喜欢看报纸，特别是国际新闻，因为我可以学习其他文化(or 因为它可以让我学习其他文化)。

放学后我（常常 you did not describe the frequency like often or something like that?）读名人新闻。

虽然名人很有意思，但是他们很 肤浅。

有时候我跟爸爸一起看报纸然后我们聊聊里面的文章。

I love reading newspapers. I am particularly into international news because I can learn other cultures. I read news about celebrities after school. Although celebrities are interesting, I think they are quite shallow. Sometimes I read newspapers with my Dad then we talk about the articles.