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Daniel Esteban
Happy birthday Hi everyone! It is the birthday to my dougtar today! She is very happy because she completed tem year old, but I don't buyed nothing to her, then I asked to her " do you gonna go to out chose anything to buy? " . Yes , she sed. Then we goes to the mall near at us home, just ten minutes. Then we goes to library when she choice a book that a famous girl teen youtuber in Brazil.I liked that choose her then I think, "OH my God, my baby grow up, She don't gonna to play barbies. "

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Happy birthday

Hi everyone! It is the birthday of my daughter today! She is very happy because she is ten years old, but I don't buy anything for her, so I asked to her " do you want to go out and chose something to buy? " . Yes , she said. Then we went to the mall near at our home,its just ten minutes from myn house. Then we went to the library where she choose a book about a famous girl teen youtuber in Brazil. I liked that choice for her then I think, "OH my God, my baby has grown up, She don't want to play barbies. "
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Happy Birthday

Hi everyone! It is my daughter's birthday today! She is very happy because she's now ten years old. I didn't buy her anything, then I asked to her, "Do you want go to out and choose something to buy?" "Yes," she said. Then we went to the mall near our home, just ten minutes away. Then we went to a library, where she chose a book by a famous teen girl who is a youtuber in Brazil. I liked her choice. Then I thought, "Oh my God, my baby's growing up. She's not going to play with barbies anymore."


(Oi Daniel, wow muita coisa para corrigir! Se você quiser melhorar a sua habilidade de construir frases em Inglês, dê uma olhada na minha pagina, e seja bem-vindo.)

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