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Workout have been changing my life It's been 3 years since I started doing regular exercise. You might want to know how I started and why I started. Back the time 3 years ago, I was always so negative, and feel updset without any reason. I always knew there was something wrong with my psychological issues. Which it all comes from my family and how I grew up with lacking of love. It turns out unsecrity and depression always with me. With time flying, I grraduated from college. I moved to bigger city, Chengdu, the capital city in Sichuan province, one of the biggest cities from western of China. I found a good job in international company luckily by chance. After 3 months probation, my company transfered me to Shanghai, the most internationl and biggest city in China. When I arrived in Shanghai, everything is so exciting and new for me. but when exciting moments fading aways, I started feeling no sense of belonging, all the bad feeling and emotion coming back to me again, swallowing me, eating me. Unhappiness is like a devil haunting in my life. After a while, I met one of the most important of men in my life, my ex-boyfriend. He was trying to save me and change the way how I think. He encoraged me attempt to run. To think about it. I could not catch my breath when climb up very small hill. At first 100 meters running, I had problem again to catch up breath. However, I tried again and again, everything I could run longer and longer, after two or three months, I can make it 5 kilometers without stop. Physical improvement gradually changing my metality as well. I feel I can persist in doing something, accomplish things. I bulit up more confidence. Little by Little, I become outgoing, active and postive now. Now I keep workout as my life routine. I go at least 3 or 4 time a week. I do muscle building, strength, and conditioning, multiple workout. I love the feeling to sweat, Workout just changed my life.

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Workout have been Working out has changed my life

It's been 3 years since I started doing regular exercise. You might want to know how I started and why I started. Back the time 3 years ago, I was always so negative, and feel updset upset without any reason. I always knew there was something wrong with my psychological issues. Which It all comes from my family and how I grew up with lacking of love a lack of love. It turns out unsecrity insecurity and depression were always with me.
With time flying, I grraduated graduated from college. I moved to bigger city, Chengdu, the capital city in Sichuan province, one of the biggest cities from western of China. I found a good job in with a international company luckily by chance. After 3 months probation, my company transfered transferred me to Shanghai, the most internationl culturally diverse and biggest city in China. When I arrived in Shanghai, everything is was so exciting and new for me. but when When the exciting moments started fading aways away, I started feeling no sense of belonging,. all All the bad feeling feelings and emotion emotions started coming back to me again, swallowing me, eating me. Unhappiness is was like a devil haunting in my life.

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Workouts have been changing my life

It's been 3 years since I started doing regular exercise. You might want to know how I started and why I started. Back then, I was always so negative, and felt upset without any reason. I always knew there was something wrong with my outlook. It all comes from my family and how I grew up without love. It turns out insecurity and depression were my old friends. 
With time flying, I graduated from college. I moved to a bigger city, Chengdu, the capital city of the Sichuan province, one of the biggest cities in western China. I found a good job in an international company luckily by chance. After 3 months' probation, my company transferred me to Shanghai, the most international and biggest city in China. When I arrived in Shanghai, everything was so exciting and new for me but when these exciting moments faded away, I started feeling no sense of belonging, and all the bad feeling and emotion came back to me again, swallowing me, eating me. Unhappiness is like a devil haunting my life.
After a while, I met one of the most important men in my life, my ex-boyfriend. He was trying to save me and change how I thought. He encouraged me to attempt to run. To think about it, I could not catch my breath when climbing up a very small hill. At first, running 100 meters, I had a problem again to catch my breath. However, I tried again and again, and each time I could run longer and longer. After two or three months, I could make 5 kilometers without a stop. Physical improvement gradually changed my mentality as well. I felt I could persist in doing something, and accomplish things. I built up more confidence. Little by Little, I became outgoing, and am active and positive now.
Now I keep workouts as part of my life routine. I go at least 3 or 4 times a week. I do muscle building, strength, and conditioning, multiple workouts. I love the feeling to sweat, Workouts just changed my life.

Very well written!

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Working out has been changing my life

It's been 3 years since I started doing regular exercise. You might want to know how I started and why I started. Back the time 3 years ago, I was always so negative, and would *feel upset* without any reason. I always knew there was something wrong with my psychological issues. Which it all comes from my family and how I grew up with the lack of love. It turns out unsecrity insecurity  and depression are * always with me.
With time flying by , I graduated from college. I moved to bigger city, Chengdu, the capital city in Sichuan province, one of the biggest cities from western of China. I found a good job in international company luckily by chance. After 3 months of probation, my company transfered me to Shanghai, the most internationl and biggest city in China. When I arrived in Shanghai, everything  was so exciting and new to me. but when the excitement moment faded away**, I started feeling no sense of belonging, all the bad feelings and emotions coming back to me again, swallowing me, eating me. Unhappiness is like a devil haunting in my life.
After a while, I met one of the most important of men man in my life, my ex-boyfriend. He was trying to save me and change the way how I think. He encouraged me attempt to run. To think about it. I could not catch my breath when I climbed up a very small hill. At first 100 meters running, I had a problem again to catch up my breath. However, I tried again and again, everything I could to run longer and longer, after two or three months, I can make it 5 kilometers without stopping. Physical improvement is gradually changing my mentality as well. I feel I can persist in doing something, accomplish things. I built up more confidence. Little by Little, I'm becoming outgoing, active and postive now.
Now I keep my workout as my life routine. I go at least 3 or 4 times a week. I do muscle building, strength, and conditioning, multiple workouts. I love the feeling to of sweat( or I love the feeling of sweating) , Working out  just changed my life.
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After a while, I met one of the most important of men in my life, my ex-boyfriend. He was trying to save me and change the way how I think thought. He encoraged encouraged me to attempt to run. To think about it, I could not catch my breath when I climb climbed up a very small hill. At first 100 meters running, I had problem problems again to catch up catching my breath. However, I tried again and again. everything Everyday I could run longer and longer, after two or three months, I can could make it 5 kilometers without stop stopping. Physical improvement gradually began changing my metality mentality as well. I feel I can persist in doing something, accomplish things. I bulit built up more confidence. Little by Little, I become became outgoing, active and postive positive now.
Now I keep workout as my life routine. I go at least 3 or 4 time a week. I do muscle building, strength and conditioning, multiple other workouts. I love the feeling to of sweat, Workout working out just has changed my life.

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