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A Drink in the Passage by Alan Paton. • A Drink in the Passage, by Alan Paton, is a short story about a black well-educated South African winning-prize sculptor called Edward Simelane who one night met in the street a white guy called Jannie van Rensburg who was staring at Edward’s sculpture called “African Mother and Child” right outside a windows’ art gallery. Suddenly, to Edward’s surprise, Jannie started talking to him as if they knew for a long time and commented about how deeply touched he felt about that piece of art and how nice it would be to greet the author. Without knowing that the person next to Jannie was the author himself, he invited Edward to have a drink with him (this was very unusual at that time due to apartheid.) With very discomfort and reluctance, Edward finally accepted the invitation. This decision would lead him to find himself drinking alcohol among a whole group of white people, with the aggravating factor that this was taking place after curfew and outside his neighbourhood. After a couple of minutes, he realised that the whole situation was quite bizarre, so he excused himself by telling van Rensburg it was getting late to catch the last train home. Jannie offered Simeland a lift to the train station and drop him there to never see each other again.
22 de abr. de 2017 1:56
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A Drink in the Passage by Alan Paton.

• A Drink in the Passage, by Alan Paton, is a short story about a black well-educated South African prize-winning sculptor named Edward Simelane. One night, he met a white man named Jannie van Rensburg, in the street. He was staring at Edward’s sculpture African Mother and Child from outside an art gallery's window. Suddenly, to Edward’s surprise, Jannie started talking to him as if they had known one another for a long time. He commented how deeply touched he felt about that piece of art and how nice it would be to greet the artist. Without knowing that the person next to Jannie was the artist himself, he invited Edward to have a drink with him (this was very unusual at that time due to apartheid.) With much discomfort and reluctance, Edward finally accepted the invitation. This decision would lead him to find himself drinking alcohol amongst a whole group of white people, with the aggravating factor that this was taking place after curfew and outside his neighbourhood. After a couple of minutes, he realised that the whole situation was quite bizarre, so he excused himself by telling van Rensburg it was getting late for catching the last train home. Jannie offered Simeland a lift to the train station, and dropped him there- to never see each other again.

22 de abril de 2017
1. artists sculpt but authors write. 2. whatever you add an apostraphe to in order to show possession belongs to that noun. So, "windows' art gallery" means that literally, the art gallery is inside of the glass instead of the building. 3. your sentences need to be condensed or broken up into multiple sentences. 4. because you made a lovely and astute description of the artist, it is inconsistant to use the word "guy," which is very informal conversation. 5. Depending on where you are from, both the title of the book and name of the sculpture should have specific identifying type, such as italic, underline, or in quotations. I am an American native born speaker so type rules may vary. 6. "much discomfort" because discomfort is a noun and you are quatifying it. "Very" is an adverb that is used to describe adjectives. ex: "He was very uncomfortable." Hope that helps! Have a nice weekend. ☺
22 de abril de 2017
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