IELTS writing task 1 -
Instruction: The graph shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and versus countries that have not. *(I am assuming you are contrasting the two types of countries)*The bar chart illustrates the annual growth of the Gross Domestic Products (GPD) around the world from 1960 to 1990 in 10 years intervals.
*("Globaliser" is not a recognized English word, unless it is a technical term used in a specific industry. Did you mean "Globalist"?)*
It can be seen that in 1960, wealthy countries were the ones that used more had a higher GPD with approximately 4.8%, in contrast, with the Globaliser and Non-globaliser countries. On In the 70s it can be seen more balance with almost 3% in the wealthy countries and the globaliser, being the non-globaliser countries the one with more percentage up to 3%. *(It is unclear what you are trying to say in this sentence)*
It is clear that on during the 1920s the average in the wealthy countries, continue continued decreasing but the column of rate for the non-globalise countries went down dramatically until it reached a low of 0.8%
Finally, ond during the 90s, according to the bar graph, the globaliser countries' GDP increased dramatically to 4.9% while at the same time, the non-globaliser went up to 1.3%, while the wealthy countries continue decreasing until reach its lowest level of 2.0%
It is clearly evident that the wealthy countries shows a pattern of going down between during those years while the globaliser countries were doing the contrary opposite. by In comparison, the non-globaliser countries suffered sudden changes during that time.
IELTS writing task 1 -
Instruction: The graph shows the average growth in domestic products in wealthy countries, countries that have adopted a global approach to business and countries that have not.The bar chart illustrates the annual growth of Gross Domestic Products (GPDGDP) around the world from 1960 to 1990 in 10-years intervals
It can be seen that in 1960, wealthy countries were the ones that used more GPDGDP with approximately 4.8%, in contrast, with the Globaliser and Non-globaliser countries. OnIn the 70s more balance it can be seen more balance with almost 3% in the wealthy countries and the globaliser, being the non-globaliser countries the one with more percentage up to 3%.
It is clear that onin the 1920s the average in the wealthy countries, continued decreasingto decrease but the column of the non-globalise countries went down dramatically until it reached a low of 0.8%
Finally, onin the 90s, according to the bar graph, the globaliser countries increased dramatically to 4.9% at the same time, the non-globaliser went up to 1.3%, while the wealthy countries continued decreasing until reaching its lowest level a low of 2.0%
It is clearly evident that the wealthy countries shows a pattern going down between those years while the globaliser countries were doing the contrary by in comparison to the non-globaliser countries and suffered sudden changes.
