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Cat and Monkey Please correct my English mistakes Two cats lived with love in a village. They shared everything whatever they got. Once, they found a bread. They fought with each other while distribution. One cat felt her piece of bread smaller than second cat.

When they both could not reach any conclusion, a monkey came to them. They told the whole story to monkey and asked for justice. The monkey brought a scale to measure the pieces of the bread. He kept both pieces each side and started measuring. He took bite of bread which piece got heavy. Hence the monkey ate sometime this side piece and sometime opposite side's.

Both cats waited for his jugement quietley. When the cats saw the pieces of bread getting smaller, they said to him that we would distribute by ourselves.

The monkey said " As you think correct. I should get something for my hard work.". He had eaten rest of the pieces and ran the cats away.

The both cat had regretted about his mistake and understood that " Divide among themselves is bad. Other can take advantage of this.".

21 de abr. de 2018 21:06
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Cat and Monkey Please correct my English mistakes

Two cats lived with love in a village. They shared everything, whatever they got. Once, they found a piece of bread. They fought with each other while distribution. One cat felt her piece of bread was smaller than second cat's.

When they both could not reach any conclusion, a monkey came to them. They told the whole story to monkey and asked for justice. The monkey brought a scale to measure the pieces of the bread. He put one piece on each side and started measuring. He took a bite of the piece that was heavy. Hence, the monkey sometimes ate this side's piece and sometimes the opposite side's.

Both cats waited for his judgement quietly. When the cats saw the pieces of bread getting smaller, they said to him that they would distribute by themselves.

The monkey said "If you think that, I should get something for my hard work.". He had eaten rest of the pieces and ran the cats away.

The both cat had regretted about their mistake and understood that "Dividing amongst themselves is bad. Others can take advantage of that."

21 de abril de 2018

Cat and Monkey 

In a village, two cats lived with love. They shared everything. Once, they found bread. They fought with each other while distributing it. One cat felt her piece of bread was smaller than the second cat's.

When they both could not reach any conclusion, a monkey came to them. They told the whole story to the monkey and asked for a solution. The monkey brought a scale to measure the pieces of the bread. He placed both pieces on each side of himself and started measuring. He took a bite from the bread to see what piece would become heavy. The monkey sometimes ate a piece to one side and sometimes ate the opposite side's piece.

Both cats waited for his judgement quietly. When the cats saw the pieces of bread becoming smaller, they said to him that we would distribute it themselves.

The monkey replied, "Even though you think choosing for yourself is correct, I should still get something for my hard work." He devoured the remaining pieces and ran the cats away.

Both of the cats regretted this mistake and realized that being divided among themselves is bad and that others can take advantage of our conflicts."

21 de abril de 2018

Cat and Monkey Please correct my English mistakes

Two cats lived peacefully in a village. They shared everything everything they had. Once, they found some bread. They fought with each other over who got what. One cat felt her piece of bread smaller than the other cat.

When they both could not reach a conclusion, a monkey came to them. They told the whole story to monkey and asked for justice. The monkey brought a scale to measure the pieces of the bread. He took the pieces from each side and started measuring. He took bite of bread which piece got heavy. Hence the monkey ate sometime this side piece and sometime opposite side's.

Both cats waited for his jugement quietley. When the cats saw the pieces of bread getting smaller, they told him "we will distribute by ourselves."

The monkey said " As you think correct. I should get something for my hard work.". He ate rest of the pieces and chased the cats away.

Both cats regretted his mistake and understood that " Division among themselves is bad. Others can take advantage of this.".

21 de abril de 2018

Cat and Monkey Please correct my English mistakes

Two cats in love lived with love in a village. They shared everything whatever [better to write only everything]  they got. Once, they found a loaf of bread. They fought with each other while distributing the bread. One cat felt her piece of bread was smaller than the one the second cat had.

When they both could not reach any conclusion, a monkey came to them. They told the whole story to the monkey and asked for justice. The monkey brought a scale to measure the pieces of the bread. He kept both pieces each side and started measuring. He took bite of bread which piece got heavy. Hence the monkey ate sometime this side piece and sometime opposite side's. difficult to understand

Both cats waited for his jugement quietley. When the cats saw the pieces of bread getting smaller, they said to him [better: told him] that they would distribute the bread themselves.

The monkey said " As you think correct. I should get something for my hard work.". He had eaten the rest of the pieces and ran the cats away. difficult to understand

The both cat had regretted about his mistake and understood that " Divide among themselves is bad. Other can take advantage of this.". difficult to understand

Try writing one more time the sentences whose meaning seems unclear. You can do it!

21 de abril de 2018
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